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Ill never stop fighting igniting the flame of desire
candle light that tames me so rightly
Height is my leverage as I pledge to you now
cowardly hearts beat out of sound
The ground is so thick with inverted desire
heavenly angels come gathering around
Anticipation it kills me from now within
sin has fallen into the tin cup
Disturbed is my logic that welted now up
broken and shattered like the pain inside of me
Maybe one day it will of forgiven
since you cant exchange that severance
The advantage I face has left
fallen from grace and now to my death
The last breath I breath is on your account
for it was loves twisted envy I couldn't do without
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was being random again. :matrixfight:
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*YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe: May 17, 2008, 11:11:40 PM
random is good

THIS is good

xo!

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*colacandy:iconcolacandy: May 17, 2008, 11:58:19 PM
Disturbed is my logic..... logically disturbed my tutor would say .



nice work.

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*LNIN9:iconLNIN9: May 18, 2008, 2:05:45 AM
be random more often...

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Every poem can be considered in two ways--as what the poet has to say, and as a thing which he makes.
C. S. Lewis
~Gunzino:iconGunzino: May 18, 2008, 12:36:40 PM
Tyte! Liked the line, "Ill never stop fighting igniting the flame of desire
candle light that tames me so rightly"

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Focus on GOD! Don't take criticism to heart and compliments to your head, and you'll remain grounded. Better to be lifted up to the position of a king, than forcefully taking it...

Club:
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=playacardzright:iconplayacardzright: May 18, 2008, 11:58:50 PM
yep yep.. :nod:

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=playacardzright:iconplayacardzright: May 19, 2008, 1:55:38 PM
Trying to be more random.

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"U and I don't need PERMISSION to be UNIFIED" - Lisa (lefteye) Lopes
=playacardzright:iconplayacardzright: May 19, 2008, 1:56:09 PM
Thank you kindly

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"U and I don't need PERMISSION to be UNIFIED" - Lisa (lefteye) Lopes
*colacandy:iconcolacandy: May 19, 2008, 1:57:57 PM
:) xx

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I don't listen to what art critics say. I don't know anybody who needs a critic to find out what art is.
*LNIN9:iconLNIN9: May 20, 2008, 8:41:31 AM
good for you:)

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Every poem can be considered in two ways--as what the poet has to say, and as a thing which he makes.
C. S. Lewis
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